Rhythm and Blues [G,K. Romance] (BEAST SPOILERAGE)

TheWebbuilder · Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 6:51 am Post subject:

Thanks, Mid. The song/ditty was written by Destiny.EXE and myself for this chapter, I forgot to mention that earlier.
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Cyril · Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 9:07 am Post subject:

HELLO! Man... I read this and was astounded. I enjoyed this fanfiction for many reasons. Your tasteful use of OCs, your treatment of Blues' affection for Rhythm. It all seemed to be so right.

I have never been one for reading fictions where the pairing was the dominant thing, but as soon as I saw the pun in the title, I had to check it out.

If I could rate this fanfiction, I would give it a 9/10. Why not 10? Well there were a few things grammatically and a few redundancies that did not really detract too much from the story. I did notice them becuase I have been reading Ayn Rand recently and she has like... perfect mastery over the english language in The Fountainhead. I have to say, you gave me what I expected... no indeed you exceeded my expectations for this fanfiction. Kudos to you. Also, Musical attacks rock!

Write another. XD
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Though some would contest the point that the words I have spoken mean naught, I choose to believe that the words I do speak will reach the souls of all those who choose to internalize their message. Such is with my music, my voice and my own heart.
~Connor Pelkey (Cyril Ookami)~

Unknown Neo · Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 5:24 pm Post subject:

AWWWWWWW......... That was so cute and full of emotion. Great ending. I almost wish I could do something with that amount of emotion.